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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 11 2014 7:04 AM Title: The House and The Girl

Hmmmmmm! A strange-smelling invisible gas that can shrink people? Sounds like an ultra-modern version of a mad scientist's house. Pretty cool!

My only nitpick would be the understandable pronoun accident with one certain sentence. I think you fully intended the sentence to read:

"They must be teasing me." ;-)

Reviewer: Flaming_Heart Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 08 2014 11:47 PM Title: The House and The Girl

Very intrigued by this story. I think it's going to be a fun but mysterious story. Also a haunted one.

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