Fantastic chapter! Even though these last few chapters seem to be setting up the fun stuff, know it will be great later on.

I also liked the reactions of Mark and Kat. It seemed very realistic and I can easily picutred it in my head.

You mention Ash's dad a bit, but what about her mom? Is the mom there in the story, or is she away like the dad. It would be cool if Ash's mom showed up. I wonder what her reaction will be.

This story keeps getting interesting by each chapter. I can't wait for the next one!