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Reviewer: HumanShoe Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 09 2017 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 1

Great Story! Hated the ending though. While I fully expected Keyla to die, it seems the world set up would put Stephanie in a position of woeful violation of testing parameters by removing the suit.

I demand justice for Stephanie's murder of Keyla! (Though I do wish that she had been able to recover and grow back to a normal size and receive the poetic justice of being given the rights or Mickey once he was shrunk down, but that's all in the past at this point.)

Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 08 2015 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 1

Glad to see this continued! Great concept, Jasper is my kind of Giantess.

 

Would have loved if Jasper had decided to abuse Keyla out of her suit, obviously she couldnt go as hard but I think it would have been a great power trip for Jasper.

 

Great stuff!

Reviewer: shall328 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 24 2014 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 1

Definitely love what you're doing. I wouldn't worry about stage fright, the story is doing great.

Reviewer: Simpson3k Signed [Report This]
Date: August 17 2014 11:08 AM Title: Chapter 1

How small is Keyla compared to Jasper? Does Jasper even feel Keyla below herself?

 

With the suits mentioned invisible mode there could happen some unaware situations...if the others suits features malfunction (evasion and stuff)

 

Nice idea, keep writing :)

Reviewer: shall328 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 17 2014 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wow, this is a  great story. Not sure how I missed it being posted, but I saw when the second chapter was added. I love the whole concept of the serum and the suit, very cool idea. I am curious about Jasper's appearance and size,  you told us what Keyla looked like, but not Jasper. I can't wait to read more. Keep up the great work!

Reviewer: vgiv Signed [Report This]
Date: May 01 2014 1:23 PM Title: Chapter 1

Good concept. I wonder if Keyla enjoys pain. Try to space out the paragraphs.

Reviewer: Thornton Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 01 2014 10:55 AM Title: Chapter 1

This has just been added to my favourites, Violent and Butt, two of my favourite tags. I hope you continue writing this story, I'd be a total hypocrite to criticise authors that don't finish stories as I've three that are just lying around...

But yes, more. Please. Now!

Thornton

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