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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 30 2014 9:16 PM Title: Stultified

I bet these teens have no mercy for Bill. Brittany should be more careful since there are not that many tiny people out there.

If only Bill knew that not many men are on the planet. That way, he could threaten the girls saying that he could kill himself or do what he wants. But thats no fun, lets have the girls have fun. I love dominant girls, especialy to tinies.

Since Marie lost Jimmy, she must be really paying attention to Sam to make sure that he doesnt leave her. Once Marie leaves, Jane may give Sam a few surprises up her pants.

Also, Im in love with Julianna as well. I dont see her actions being cruel, but rather sexy! I want Julianna to keep Jimmy in her panties forever!

I cant wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Suicidal thoughts are always lurking in the back of these poor space traveler's minds.  They lost their ship right off, and before the first day was over they had lost most of their crew...

Capt. Jim thinks that there might be others whom have crash landed on this giant planet before, and that's one thing that keeps him going.  He thinks that just maybe, that there might be another ship...  But, all he has is an instinct,  and that's very little to go on...

Yeh, Capt. Jimmy's up to his neck in it.... ("Lucky Bastard")  b.t.w.  thanks for that suggestion Tom!  (sewing the man down inside her panties)  Great stuff!

;`)

Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 30 2014 9:02 PM Title: Stultified

Uh oh! Bills situation just went form bad to worse. I don't know what Brittany promised to do but probablly something Bill doesn't want to happen! 

 

Looks like Sam is the only safe one at the moment, assuming Maries mom doesn't get a hold of him. Last cupcake at a weight watcher convention, funny :)

 

Thanks for the kind words on my last review, there's not many of us that share our taste, have to stick together! 

 

Looking forward to see what happens next!



Author's Response:

Thanks Max,  I can't say much about what's happening, because I don't want to give anything away....

But, (as modestly as I can...)  this is really, Really, GOOD STUFFF!  ;`)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: July 30 2014 2:29 PM Title: Stultified

The tail end of chapter 8: "The little girl had stolen Bob from Valerie's foot bath."

Or, something to that effect.

Author's Response:

Oh Yeah!  That's right... his name's Billy Bob, and you can call him Bill, or Bob, Bobby, Billy, Robert, Robby, Willy, Will, Will-I Am, or whatever ya want to call him...  Capt. Jim just calls him Dude...

;`)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 30 2014 12:11 PM Title: Stultified

So, I _was_ right! There were only two initial crushees. The survivors are Bob, Bill, Sam, and Capt. Jim.

I can't wait to see if Marie decides to become pro-active in rescuing the latter (instead of waiting for Julianne to be considerate*).

*Again, I'd probably win MEGABUCKS FOR LIFE, on the first try, before anything else unlikelier happened.

Author's Response:

Odds are... you're most likely correct.  Although, (I've messed up with character names before,...) I don't recollect using 'Bob'?  Which chapter was it?  ;`) 

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