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Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 19 2014 10:08 PM Title: 'Jus' Another Sunday Morn'

Rats! Was hoping Juli would keep Jim, oh well, we'll see what Marie has in store for them now that she has the 2 of them back. That Jim is one tough hombre!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 19 2014 3:26 PM Title: 'Jus' Another Sunday Morn'

Hmm, Sam got frightened very easily by Jane's mouth. How does he react to being inserted into other places?

Aw, why did Julianne give up Jimmy? Well atleast they hade their fun. I hope Julianne captures that guy from the mall.

So Marie has two tiny people with her. It wont be long until either Jane or Julianne snatch Jim or Sam back up.

I cant wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 19 2014 9:22 AM Title: 'Jus' Another Sunday Morn'

Uh-oh! It sounds like Marie is about to prove herself one of those close-fallen acorns. Or, is it apples?

Btw: the correct spellings are "scared," "considering," and "truly."

Reviewer: Jimbob Signed [Report This]
Date: August 19 2014 8:40 AM Title: 'Jus' Another Sunday Morn'

For the sake of this story, do not make Marie out to be just like all the others. I'm still disappointed that Ann ended up being so cruel.

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