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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 26 2014 2:35 PM Title: 'Headline News!'

This is a very important chapter. It tells me that a lot more is about to happen.

As for suggestions, I was wondering if a school teacher could get a tiny. A woman similar to Julianne, because Julainne is the best character. If Julainne gets a tiny again, that would also be awesome. The school teacher could also have similar methods of pleasure that Julainne is into. She could take the tiny to school inside her clothing and play with him during breaks or even during class!

About the headlines. Why 'captured'? Why not rescued? You would think that the women in that world would be suspicious if they read it like that.

What happened to Jane? She isn't that horny as I thought she would be. I thought she would make up for Julainne in these chapters, but she is sort of teasing Jim and Sam with her mouth and nipples. Hopefully things get juicy later on.

The reporter seems hot. That was quite a vivid description of her. Doesn't she have the 3 tinier right now, or do the scientists have them? I know your writing well enough Wildcat. You described the reporter enough to convince me that she wil have possession of a tiny soon.

What happened to that family who put Sam on a cake, did they just dissapear? They probably thought that SamuEl escaped anyway.

I wonder what is going to happen at the park when everyone literally shows up there?

It should be interesting in the next few chapters. I can't wait!

Author's Response:

"Captured",... because the tiny men where desparately, trying to get away from the giants!  Good or Bad, they have no idea what's happened to them, and being that small, their terrified of these gigantic females...

Jane is still just as naughty as before.  Maybe even 'more so',... I'll continue the next chapter, right where this one left off; (Just to prove that Jane's still Got It!)

Marie still works at the Coffee Shop, (The one that Big Brenda Owns,... remember?) Big Brenda, and her two daughter's, might have another chapter or two, I haven't got to that point yet,...

Don't want to give too much away,.. but there's alot more to come!  ;`)

Good suggestions Tom!   Thanks, for the additional side note,  ( I didn't fully realize that I 'built-up' that News Reporter, all that much!  But, yes,...she might become another player in this fantasy....

 

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 26 2014 11:53 AM Title: 'Headline News!'

Jane is becoming a real pain in the astronautical section (lol).

Author's Response:

'Astro- Nomically' Lol!  ;`)

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