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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 03 2014 3:51 PM Title: 'Hide and Seek'

Geez, talk about luck. Marie always seems to be the one finding these tiny men.

Marie will probably bring them home and soon all 4 tinies meet. The tinies then collaborate and start building a radio and satellite hoping to get communication. However as they were building it, Jane shows up and her eyes glisten as she spots 4 little men at once.

Then Jane has her way with them and Marie shows up disgusted with her mom. Jane smiles back and asks Marie if she wants to try it. Marie immediately declined and takes all the tinies away from Jane and hide them in her room.

Jane, now a little diss appointed, asks Julianee to help her out. Julainne secretly sneaks into the house while Jane distracts Marie. Julianne snatches all 4 tinies and tried to sneak out but she remembers that she promised two of them to Jane. She doesn't care and takes all 4 with her and Jane is furious. Marie is now super furious for lack of a better word.

Now Jane and Marie plot to steal the tinies. They failed. Jane distracted Julianne but Marie couldn't find the tinies. Little did they know that Julianne kept a two tinies in each bra cup, one tied to the fornt of her panties and another to the back of her panties.

Marie then demands Julainne to give them but she refuses. Juliane replies that Marie has to go get them. Marie declines, but Jane thinks it will be worth it, so she starts ripping Julliane's clothes off shocking both Marie and Julianne.

Marie is disgusted in watching her mother strip her sister, so she tells them to stop. Marie makes a deal that she gets two tinies for finding them all, gives on to Jane and one to Julianne. They all reluctantly agree.

The end.

Man, this story is fun to talk about.

Author's Response:

The End???  Already??  ......   This is just the first HALF,  Dude! 

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 03 2014 11:00 AM Title: 'Hide and Seek'

So much for Marie doing her civic duty! Something tells me _anyone_ who obeyed that giant President's directive would be more of an exception than a rule.

Author's Response:

Marie has four little guys in her care, now... and she'll have to start thinking about some place to keep all of them...

Maybe her mother, Jane,   will have some ideas about that?   ;`)

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