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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 09 2014 11:32 PM Title: 'The Rescue Mission'

Ha! Punching in space! Doesn't get better than that.

Well I may take that back in the next few chapters. :)

Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 09 2014 9:13 PM Title: 'The Rescue Mission'

Ha! Nice touch :) Something tells me the women there are going to have some new toys soon!

Fell behind, Jane on the Couch was awesome and my most favorite recent chapter but of course you knew that would be up my ally :)



Author's Response:

      Yeah, Janie's a real Charmer, she's the 'block', that Julianna was 'chipped' off from. ;`)

 Just a heads up; the coming chapters are mearly a set up, for what's going to happen 'after' the ship arrives on this 'new' planet earth.  Some of the crew will seem to be a pretty tough bunch, but,... we'll see what happens when they finally realize 'just where', they actually are!    _"*.*"_ 

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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 09 2014 10:08 AM Title: 'The Rescue Mission'

Max, you coward! Get back in your seat. Or, Privates Ommick and Scribe will beat you till you look like you were clobbered with an ugly-stick!!

Seriously, though; this chapter was a real hoot. I especially loved the 1980's song reference! I can't wait to read how the ship winds up "drifting/falling" towards the surface of GTS-World. ;-)

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