Date: September 15 2014 11:40 AM Title: 'Crashing at the Park'
Cool start to a new set of characters, I can't wait to find out what happens to these guys!
Author's Response:
Thanks Gadget!
[Report This]Date: September 15 2014 7:02 AM Title: 'Crashing at the Park'
Awesome job depicting that crash scene! Same thing for the ship's discovery. Although, I'm a little confused about the plot device concerning the governor's wife (Vera Shoom, was it?).
Were you hinting that she's part of some matriarchal, X-filesque conspiracy?
Author's Response:
Thanks Cary! Ha! I knew that 'you', would find that little piece of the puzzel, having a more intricate part in this 'little' tale! (Vera Shoom LOl!) Good One! ...so, you couldn't think of one for 'Whapth' 'Whapth'... ;`)
[Report This]Date: September 14 2014 11:15 PM Title: 'Crashing at the Park'
Finally they landed! Now these girls are attacking them. How old are they? They sound like teens.
Well, max just kidnapped. I wonder what happens next.
I think it's time we pay the other tinies a visit and see how they are doing. :)
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks Tom! Can't switch back, just yet,... We have to finish out the rest of this scene first. Although, I haven't forgotten about Billy Bob, Ann's mother, Jennifer, still has him wrapped up pretty tightly...
[Report This]Date: September 14 2014 7:52 PM Title: 'Crashing at the Park'
I love the casual touch you add to your stories, like how she simply stuffs Max into her pocket, it always drives home the point just how helpless the tinies are to them.
Also, if I haven't said so already, thank you very much for the character homage!
Author's Response:
Thank You, kind Sir. Character Homage? Why, I don't know what you're refering to,... ;`)