[Report This]Date: November 11 2014 2:19 AM Title: 'The Hospital ~Part Two'
I agree with the other reviews. This is by far the most interesting story that is being updated on a consistent basis.
Some of my other favorite authors just....disappeared or something. Glad you are still into this story.
The doctor trying to grab Jack reminds me of when I was trying to catch my first fish when I was a kid. I couldn't grab that darn thing. It kept slipping from my hands. Lol.
Just want to clarify something. Is there a doctor and 1 assistant, or 2 assistants? I see the doctor, Amber, and Rachel. Is Amber the doctor, or a 2nd assistant? I recognize Rachel, but not Amber.
I'm ready for Jane and Marie to have some fun. Haven't seen them in for ever. I couldn't resist smiling at your response to Carycomis review. I really want to see what does, especially since now I have a hint that Jane will take Cary to play with.
I can't wait for the chapter after the next chapter! Lol
Author's Response:
Amber and Rachel are both trainees, working under Dr. Elizibeth Harris. Amber is a tall, skinny, red head, with big blue eyes. Rachel is shorter, with brown hair and brown eyes, slightly plump, but, not fat. They're both about 25, but look and act much younger...
...Dr. Harris is smokin' hot for a 'fifty-plus-er', and she's never been married,... ;`)
[Report This]Date: November 10 2014 12:31 PM Title: 'The Hospital ~Part Two'
So, all three men were "striped," huh? Would that be tiger-striped or zebra-striped?*
*LOL!
Author's Response:
Ha ha,... _ "SKUNK STRIPED!" ;`) Another one that always slips past me is,... "Lose", and "Loose",... I always seem to mix those up too!
--- It's been corrected. Thanks Cary! Maybe Jane will thank you, 'properly', in the following chapters,...? :0`