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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 01 2014 3:40 PM Title: Home~Sweet~Home

Sweet, you're back! Turkey kept u busy? Well, this was a great chapter.

I'm pretty sure Jane chose Ajet, becuase that's the guy that Jane was asking whether he was clean or not, and he is definitely clean by now.

That was some great math Cary...(slow clap).

Why couldn't Marie wash Ajet and Cary at the same time? Atleast bring them both to the bathroom, so she doesn't have to deal with Jane.

Also, why is Jane so slow on capturing a tiny? Like every time she is about to take one, Marie shows up. Deja vu all over again.

By the clothing that Jane was wearing, I can assume that she will probably do some naughty things to that specific tiny.

I hope Julianne returns and takes a tiny as well. That would be awesome!

I can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response:

Thanks Tom!  Yeah, I had to babysit my two litttle neice's,... my sister's regular 'Babysitter', took vacation and she didn't have anyone else avaliable to watch them on short notice,  so I got stuck watching the two little she-beasts for the entire weekend!

It wasn't too bad though,... their really sweet little girls, when their asleep...  ;`)

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I might bring Julianna back into the next chapter,... she's starting to get anxious again,  it's been awhile for her, and she's got an itch she just can't scratch!

Thanks again,... and I hope you had a good Thanksgiving as well! 

 

 

Reviewer: pequeno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 01 2014 1:01 PM Title: Home~Sweet~Home

That story is in my favorite list. I love the marie's mother, is the better part.



Author's Response:

Thanks Pequeno! ... - Oh, and by the way, reALLY Like the Penname... ;`)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 01 2014 8:21 AM Title: Home~Sweet~Home

"He should be clean," Marie replied: "I held his soapy body under 'Ajet' of warm water for the last five minutes."

X-D

Author's Response:

Jane quickly interjects,  - "He won't be clean for very long,... I've got a 'dirty' little job, that he's just the right size for!"  -


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