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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 29 2014 9:30 AM Title: 'Let the Games Begin'

Oh, Julianna is definitely worse than Zavia! Breaks the rules she sets for these "games" when the little guys look like they're going to win. Wants everything her sister has just to deprive her of it. :-(

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 14 2014 5:44 PM Title: 'Let the Games Begin'

So, what exactly was the game? It sounded like Ajet had to start from the arm of the couch and get somewhere by also dodging Julianne's fingers. Otherwise, I was kinda confused and couldnt tell if Ajet actually made it or not. Ajet was told the rules, but not me. lol

Ah, now Jane has Ajet, and Julianne has Cary. Marie still has Jimmy and Samuel, but they are exhausted. They should be rested by now though.

When Jane was desciribing the consequences of the game, she made spending time with Julianne as the punishment if Ajet fails at the game. It seemed as though Jane knew that Julianne was more crueler than her. I wonder how Jane knew that, becuase I would love to listen to that discussion.

At one point, Marie said that if Jane and Julianne wanted to use them as slaves, go ahead. However, when Ajet was stuck in Julianne's thighs, Marie found that unnacceptable and wanted Julianne to stop. Those two scenes contradict each other, unless Marie happened to change her mind.

In addition, when Jane was telling Ajet about the punishment of staying with Julianne, Jane said that "he had to do whatever she says, or else." I really want to know what is the 'or else' part becuase I think Julianne has the most humiliating tactics of tormenting these guys. Of course, she is sexy, but in reality to the men, Im not sure what is worse than being tied to a pair of painties and being worn 24/7.

Anyway, Im glad Julianne has a tiny now. Things are starting to heat up and I cant wait for the next chapter!

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