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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 12 2015 8:38 AM Title: Chapter 50

Let me guess: all the "pets" get "accidentally" killed. :-(

Author's Response:

No, No, no, no, no,... not 'accidentally',... hee hee hee.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 11 2015 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 50

I thought I was in the sewer for a sec. I guess I didnt.

Why do I have the feeling that Im gonna die next chapter? I hope not. I would rather die to a sexy MILF than a dozen of school girls.

Aw, the end is near?!!!! I thought it was just the middle! Julianna and Jane just got their pets and Zena barely had any fun with Max.

I would love a part 2; this world is awesome, and the characters have great personalities.

So its gonna get nasty, huh? To me, the more nastier, the more interesting.

I cant wait for the Zena Maxwell chapter!

Author's Response:

  ;~/   Naw,... you're not gonna DIE!  But, you might wish that they WOULD, kill ya!  Sorry, I didn't mean that the story was going to 'ABRUPTLY' just end,... I just meant, that it's now past the halfway point,... and the pace of the story will have to pick up in order for me to get around to all of the other side stories,...

"Zena Maxwell and Max."  "Tim, Spooky, and Jack."  "Cary and Julianna."  "Ajet and Jane."  "Marie, Jim and Sam."..... and the one that I'm working on now; "Major Tom and ******  ;)  sorry, no spoiler's Tom! hee hee hee

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