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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 18 2015 10:18 PM Title: 'Rub-a Dub-Dub'

Wow, I cant believe I didnt review this chapter. I must have skimmed over it while looking at the most recent section.

Sofia sounds very sexy, but she sounds like one of those girls that acts tough around friends and then reveals her true self to certain people as a nice and caring person.

Nancy so far gave me the best punishment with her panties. Sofia seems to be just teasing me so I expect something more interesting later.

Also, why was the first half of this chapter a staring contest? lol. I know it was just your vivid descriptions making the chapter long, but it also felt like they were staring at each other for a long time as well.

I hope the next chapter is not my last, the giantess are great and I would love to see Tom spend time with other people as well. I would rather die to an adult rather than a teen, but who knows, maybe in this story, the teens just love me.

Hoping for the next chapter soon, unless maybe you were waiting for my review first....

Anyway, I cant wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Well, I did start to think that 'maybe', I had gone a little too far, with Sofia's insulting remarks,... However, I assumed that your skin was tougher than that!  Ha!  I was kinda, holding up, and waiting for you... since you were the central charactor. 

... I do have several paths worked out for the story.  I just haven't completely worked out the ending,... yet.  

 

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 15 2015 1:40 PM Title: 'Rub-a Dub-Dub'

Sofia gave meaning to the phrase: "Major Tom is coming home."

LOL!

Author's Response:

Good One!  Thanks Cary!  ;`)

Reviewer: littletoy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 14 2015 11:11 PM Title: 'Rub-a Dub-Dub'

Ok I love these scenes, as opposed to the more MILF scenes. You had a scene in "The Decrement of Tom" near the end of that story where a tiny guy was passed around and fondled by a group of young women. I always wanted to know what happned to that lucky guy but he was just a side plot to a much larger story. 
I hope you can do something like that here where the tiny guy is humiliated by his mere size difference rather than being outright mistreated in a cruel way. So far I love this newest chapter a lot! 
I would love to see this theme expanded in a future story and I love your work as always. Just don't forget about us gentle fans who also dig what you are doing here! Keep it up!



Author's Response:

Wow!  Thanks man!  Yes, the MILF scenes always seem to be a might bit more,...rough.   It's always good to have some natural curiousity and playfulness, that a group of teen girls can bring into it.  However, I always try and start out with a 'gentle' idea in mind, and then once I get the wheels turning,.. I can't help myself from adding a little 'fear' into the recipe... LOL!

Oh, that lucky guy in 'The Decrement of Tom', I just left that to the readers 'imagination'... 

*Humiliated, by just the mere' ''size difference'' alone.  That seems to be where alot of dialogue comes in. I need to work on that specific aspect more,... Simple conversation, that feels 'real' .... is really difficult to produce for me, for some reason...

It really thrills me to know that you, liked this 'a-lot', you've just made my day, Littletoy!  ;`)

Thanks for reviewing, and I'll try to add some 'Gentle Stuff', but... I can't promise anything! LOL!  .....   ;)

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