[Report This]Date: January 30 2015 11:00 PM Title: 'Swept Away'
Oh, I like where this is going :)
Author's Response:
Cool! ;`)
[Report This]Date: January 30 2015 10:32 AM Title: 'Swept Away'
Out of the soap dish; into the fire?
Author's Response:
Maybe,.... but, then Aga-ain,... who knows?
[Report This]Date: January 29 2015 1:13 AM Title: 'Swept Away'
Wait a minute! I'm not dead yet! Yahooooo!!
More chapters for me then! I'm glad I'm out of that school, those teen girls were like a nightmare, then they just put me on that little shelf where they put soap? How cruel, but why? Why would they just leave me there? Weren't they all desperate to use me? I'm curious about that.
A hand just appeared out of nowhere and snatched him up? Didn't he see it, or atleast hear her approaching? I mean, the floor should be kinda wet.
Thanks for making a longer chapter, and for extending my story. It seems to get better and better!
Who is Anez? A girl, a teacher? A hot mom? Julianna's friend? Lol, I'm just trying to connect everything to Julianne. You said she looked older, so it can't be a school girl. Must be a sexy teacher or hot mom. I like both options but if I had to choose, I would go with the hot mom.
So many possibilities! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Next chapter will answer most of those questions, and, possibly shed some light on a few more,... ;`)
[Report This]Date: January 28 2015 11:23 PM Title: 'Swept Away'
Dang, Tom can't catch a break. Will Anez treat him better? Hopefully since I think Tom will die of hunger soon. Plus he has had it rough. Though he isn't the only one.
Author's Response:
Yeah they've all had it pretty rough, but there just might be some gentle-ness coming their way.