Reviewer: riczar Signed [Report This]
Date: July 24 2014 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 4: The Turnover

I don't want to be the only person commenting here, so I was hesitant to comment again so soon.  But I'm terribly confused by your latest chapter.  Did he stumble upon the device that does the Turnover?  But instead of just changing people's sexes, he changed everyone's size?  And what was the cause of that time stop, and why wasn't he affected by it?  I hope you can clarify what happened in this chapter and what the actual mechanics of the Turnover is.

Author's Response:

I guess I didn't do a great job explaining the Turnover.  He was chosen: that's why everyone else froze.  The rest will be explained in the next chapter.  Hope that helps clear it up some.