Reviews For Beach Girl
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Reviewer: 101st airborne Signed [Report This]
Date: September 28 2014 2:26 PM Title: 'Anger and Relief'

Beautiful beautiful story i love it 

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 25 2014 5:12 PM Title: 'Anger and Relief'

Damn, I kind of feel bad for these two.

 

They both meet somebody who they generally care about and in true Dan/Elise fashion everything goes about as wrong as it could.

 

I'm looking forward to final few chapters.

Reviewer: zumi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 25 2014 3:43 PM Title: 'Anger and Relief'

Uffda, that was quite a chapter. Sorry to see them part with such sad sorrow. Very nice unaware though, hope you happen to include that element again. :) Looking forward to resolution! 

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