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Reviewer: Jmeuliere Signed [Report This]
Date: August 30 2014 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 4

Woooooooooooow this is really good man, really like your writing style and the story, the character of Molly wich is initially a good girl but due to circumstances, becomes a gentle giga giantess predator, really hope to see more of that artwork, but please try to make little parahgraphs, it's much easier to read

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 30 2014 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 4

Wow. This story is great. Perfectly paced and perfectly detailed. And I'm loving this Molly character more and more. I cannot wait to see what happens next.

aaron

Reviewer: Saf Signed [Report This]
Date: August 30 2014 8:22 AM Title: Chapter 4

The big block of text on Chapter 4 is a little hard to read. I recommend starting new lines for each instance of dialogue; that'll make it much easier to follow.

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