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Reviewer: Haloichigo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 02 2014 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 5

Great story so far, my only issue was the clustering of paragraphs, but that issue is not that great in your later chapters. I love giantess foot scenarios like these and I especially like that the story is based around a crowd as opposed to one small person, which are my favorite type of stories and they are not very common, I am glad your story is a good crowd shrink story, so I have something to look forward to while I browse the site.

The description is very good and the internal conflict you gave molly about the situation and how she treats the tinies after making up her mind is amazing, I hope to see all these good things in your future chapters, great work.

Reviewer: dudeduderson2000 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 01 2014 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 5

This story is incredibly awesome, please do not stop!

Reviewer: Jmeuliere Signed [Report This]
Date: September 01 2014 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 5

AMAZING!

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 01 2014 12:35 PM Title: Chapter 5

This is getting good. You seem to be getting a better feel of these characters as well. Can't wait to see what happens next.

aaron

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