Date: June 06 2017 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 1: Setting it up
I am not going to say this is a bad story, of course it is not. But I will admit I wish it would have remained as its original intent: with the girl being actually sick and them entering her. Unfortunatly I will say that instead, it took a drastic turn as oppose to the direction I wanted. But I will run on the saying "Don't yuck someone elses yum," as I know others may (and have enjoyed it.) I'm just saying this as my own personal opinion.
Date: October 13 2014 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 1: Setting it up
Looking good. This story is turning into quite the tale of fun. I'm very keen to continue reading and can't wait for the next installment
Date: September 05 2014 12:02 PM Title: Chapter 1: Setting it up
Fun story so far. I'm eager to read more since this story has everything I like; micro and unaware, plus, according to the tags, couples and giants. Hell yea!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I feel like if I were to write multiple stories, all of them would be centered around voyuerism, since its my favorite genre. Becuase of that, micro will be natural to keep the voyuerism more realistic. This story was one way to incorporate those things, but I have many more ideas. So look out for my stories in the future if I have time to make more :)
Date: September 04 2014 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 1: Setting it up
Like the story so far. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response:
Thanks very much! Glad you are enjoying it!
Date: September 02 2014 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 1: Setting it up
Good start. Interested to see where you take this
Author's Response:
Thank you :)
I am also interested to see where I take this. Ive had lots of story ideas pop into my head over the while and this is the one I chose. Stay tuned!