Date: September 21 2014 7:57 AM Title: Chapter 1
It seems by your description in chapter 1, that ascension is a choice and purely natural. My guess is that Luna has always suffered from health problems and she'll probably have to ascend to save her life. That's going to be tough for Ash. He seems to find some comfort in Luna being the same size as him and he doesn't like being treated as less then an equal. Luna seems so sweet and innocent, but I wonder how much of that is because she seems a bit . . . slow. I wonder how much of that sweetness she'll lose by ascending. I forsee some marital problems lurking.
Author's Response:
Interesting thoughts. Thanks!
Date: September 19 2014 11:17 AM Title: Chapter 1
I'm really enjoying this story so far. Keep it up
Author's Response:
Will do! Thanks!!
Date: September 19 2014 10:15 AM Title: Chapter 1
Hmm I'm intrested in this story, keep it up!
/high-five
Author's Response:
Excellent, thank you!
[Report This]Date: September 18 2014 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
Regan seems like the mother type while Addi seems like the father type. Can't wait to see more ash/addi interactions. It seems like ash has it made though with all those women wanting his attention.
Author's Response:
Addie is the quiet type. We'll see more of those interactions later.
As for Ash, he may have escaped the frying pan. But did he jump into the fire?
Date: September 18 2014 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is a wonderful story so far. A fascinating world, sexy without being phony, embarrassing but believable dynamics.
Author's Response:
Thanks! And as far as the world building goes, there's still a few more surprises. :)
[Report This]Date: September 18 2014 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love the divinity world/universe it plays into the fetish so well but constantly reminds you its a fantacy. You'd go crazy living in a world like that but its so addicting to read about. That subtle dominance in every aspect of life is so hot. Like the scene with the weights in chapter 1.
Also hopefully this story will live up to its R rating, its been faaaar too long since we've had a well written mini-giantess story with some good sexy sceens. And the title of the story implys Luna will become a define.. So hopefully she won't smother ash. And would this may be be a 4-way? Either mFFF or mfFF? Either one would be fun to read... Plus the way you write Luna is she's already stunning without divinity, with it shed be a bombshell by amazon standards. I love giant curvy women....
Keep it up!
Author's Response:
Well, it may get an X rating at some point, we'll see. I'm a discovery writer so when stuff happens, I write it.
Also, the specifics of Ascension haven't been explained yet. We know Ascended are significantly larger and heal differently, but I wouldn't go so far as calling them 'divine'. At least not based on what we know so far.
Thanks for the review. It's extremely encouraging!
[Report This]Date: September 17 2014 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 1
Men must be in great demand if they're so few in number! A world dominated by women but not necessarily to the point of enslavement, it's a curious thing but I'm hooked.
Can't wait to see what else you've planned and how long Luna can last before she finally Ascends, it'll make our narrator extremely upset if she did choose to do it.
Author's Response:
Sometimes I think it would be great to live in such a world. I wonder how quickly my views would change if such were to happen. :) Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: September 17 2014 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 1
They seem like a cute family. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Coming soon. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: September 16 2014 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is phenomenal. Great job.
aaron
Author's Response:
Thanks, aaron!