Reviews For Luna's Ascension
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Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: September 22 2014 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 4

Ash will still love her but things will never be the same again, she probably will disagree with her old self when it comes to doing those things, her improved mental faculties will definitely tell her these things shouldn't be done for a reason. 

 



Author's Response:

Hmm, I hope not. I'd miss the old Luna. I share Ash's fear regarding that aspect of her Ascension.

Reviewer: MrSirk Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 22 2014 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 4

The sweetness! It's too much!

This is such a great couple. I am so pleased they're talking about these issues before the ascension. I'm gonna have to steal some of these ideas for my story BWAHAHAHA! 

I wonder how much things will change. I'm sure they have the strength to stay together but I also know it won't be as easy as they want it to.



Author's Response:

Absolutely. Steal away! After all, this story was inspired by Woman's World (littlemac) and After the Apple Fell (CLH). "There is nothing new under the sun", but it's fun to write something with a different twist.

As for how things will change, not entirely sure myself. :)

Reviewer: greaterthan3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 22 2014 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 4

Uhg cliffhangers, please don't let us have to wait too long! Really liked how this chapter was written, its almost like having to explain your fetish to someone.



Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm going to try to write the next chapter tomorrow, before I go on vacation for a week. We'll see what happens.

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