[Report This]Date: September 24 2014 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 5
I find the background of this story to grow more interesting over time. Really looking forward to whatever struggles come as ascension goes into full throttle and whatever potential drama ensues with this couple. Love the gentle (unintended) condescension that males go through in this particular new world order. Hope to read more soon.
Author's Response:
Thanks, Jim! You'll get even more world building as the story progresses. :)
Date: September 24 2014 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 5
x rating? Eh, I'm right on the fence it wasn't super gratuitous or anything. Maybe for the childrens? ......Also the sweetness! Make it Stop!
Author's Response:
Well, I made it X just to be safe. As for 'children' or any other underage characters, they won't be anywhere near content as depicted in this chapter for obvious reasons. As for the sweetness, we'll you're going to have to talk to Ash and Luna about that. :)
[Report This]Date: September 23 2014 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 5
I love it, please don't tell us this is the last update for a whole week!
Author's Response:
Alas, my vacation is upon me! I may get some time to write, but not likely. But a week goes by fast. :)
Thanks for being a consistent reviewer!