Reviewer: wildcatman Signed [Report This]
Date: December 07 2014 10:28 PM Title: Reunited

Just read the entire seven chapters straight through,... it seems that you've written this methodically, and yet, it flows so effortlessly....

I'm seriously lovin' this!  I like the way that you switch perspectives,  telling it from Kelly's view, and switching back to Jake's,... great work!  The constant undertone of his fear, keeps the suspence alive just enough; even though he keeps trying to appear like nothings bothering him...

... yet, she seems to know exactly how he's feeling.  If these two don't get together, this is gonna really suck!  LOL!  (Piss on Kevin,.. who needs him, anyway!) Ha!

This is turning out to be favorite,... great stuff Sonic!  ;`)

Author's Response:

Thank you, I'm glad you're enjoying it, and yes I do have a plot in mind to be sure. Thanks again and keep on reading