[Report This]Date: January 28 2015 11:40 PM Title: Meanwhile...
Well I think Jake and Kendra should be together. Kendra was being a little harsh at the end of this chapter.
I just don't like Kelly. She just thanks Jake nothing more. She got her size back thanks to Jake. But leaves him in a heart beat for her ex boyfriend. Then cut all connection with Jake. Only to come back begging for help.
Author's Response: Interesting take... I honestly hadn't thought of it like that but you make some good points. I think that's why I find myself so interested in this story though. There are many points of view to take and not too many "black or white" scenarios.
Date: January 28 2015 9:37 PM Title: Meanwhile...
Since Kendra knows about the shrinking, I feel Jake could have explained the situation and it would of turned out with less fighting, and maybe some back-up against Kevin.
[Report This]Date: January 28 2015 5:26 PM Title: Meanwhile...
Jake's text message back to Kelly: "WTF! You did it, Again? ..."""God""" I can't leave you alone for a second!" What some chics will do, just to suck ya back in again, and screw up a sure-thing date night with the hottest piece of ass in town" " She's a Model for cryin out loud!" ect. ect. ect...
Hee hee hee hee Not really,.. I just couldn't resist it! This is so serious, and so dramtically written, I just find myself completely drawn into the whole thing!
I have a feeling that Kevin was planning on using that 'perfume' on either Kelly, or the red head,... Or maybe both? I wonder if Kevin has ever met Kenra? Hmm, maybe those two have something going...
You really got me wondering now, Sonic. Great stuff!
I'd like to see Kendra shrink Kevin, and take him to that restaurant,... maybe ?
Author's Response:
I really loved your "text" as Jake. Definitely funny stuff. We'll have to see how it all plays out but I like all of your ideas. It's technically not known at this time if Kevin or Kendra know each other.
[Report This]Date: January 28 2015 4:59 PM Title: Meanwhile...
Ahhh the plot thickens like a nice roux. This is getting great, sonicfan.
For those of you who are still playing the dating field for mates, PROTIP: if a girl/guy says "if you do X, then we're over" and X equals something important to you (if and only if it is within reason; dont drop a date to feed your heroin addiction), then you should probably not be with that guy/girl.
Looking forward to your favorite chapter, Sonicfan!