Reviewer: versusterminus7 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 29 2015 8:44 AM Title: The More Things Change...

Ahhhh this is great. WOnderful chapter. I am very happy that Kelly and Jake are finally able to be together emotionally and sexually, despite being in their predicament. 

The scene where kelly dropped the trenchcoat is one of the hottest I've read in quite a while- the image you created is perfect. perrrrfect. 

13/10 best chapter in the story so far. 

Also, heads up: this line seems to have a typo. ""I don't feel like much of a hero... I gazed down over Kendra's hand, ... Kelly gave me a warm smile as she kept me cradled in her hands."

Author's Response:

Thank you very much (and yes, that was a clear typo, we can see I might've gotten a little over-excited as I wrote this one). 

I definitely have been setting up for this chapter for a long time. I had it in the works for quite a while so it was very satisfying to be able to write it out and have it come to life. There is still a lot more to come though, and hopefully you'll enjoy those chapters just as much, if not more. I appreciate the unrealistically high rating of 13/10