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Reviewer: Flaming_Heart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 17 2014 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 5-Trapped

Awesome chapter, but try a little longer chapters. You're killing me with the cliffhangers, let alone a short chapter.
This is a great story, with a awesome storyline. With different perspectives, should be treated with longer chapter. Even if it takes a extra day, instead of the regular 1-2 day update.

Thanks for the chapter :)

Author's Response:

The next few chapters should be a little longer because it's getting easier to put my ideas into motion as the story progresses.

Glad you are enjoying the story and thanks for the kind words,they really do help motivate me to write more.

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