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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: December 03 2014 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 4

Hmmm. I'm thinking of a skinny brunette.

Unaware, huh. Well, that changes everything. I'm guess is that Emily tapes Tom up like a mummy and inserts him into the other girl.

Then at the end, Emily just leaves Tom inside the other girl, then both girls do various activities(yoga, shopping, dancing) while Tom is stuck inside the new girl.

(Just a guess.)

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 02 2014 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 4

First of all, that's a nice picture.

Second, I want the other girl to be similar to Emily. A sadistic, creative girl who likes taping up Tom and inserting him inside her.

You did a great job with Emily so I'm not sure what else I'm looking for in this other girl.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

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