[Report This]Date: January 01 2015 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 6. What does not kill you makes you stronger
Awesome. Loved the idea of them growing after they died. Cool idea that I haven't seen before. Can't wait to see where you go from here. I'm really liking Kelly's character. So now her and Casey are twice as big as they previously were. Hope Casey holds true to her promise of shoving what's his name back up her snatch.
aaron
Author's Response:
Thanks a lot for the feedback. I'm glad you are liking it.
Regarding the idea of making them grow after they died (you will read some more about what Ron thinks about it in future chapters) is probably original but it is heavily inspired in stories where women grow (or keep growing) as a way to heal themselves. I would say that the one that is closer to the concept in this story would be Enhanced Volume 2, by element., but other stories like No Pain, No Gain from rustyrusty14 or even The Magnificent Maggie also touch on this subject.
Kelly will get much more screen time in Volume 2 than in Volume 1. I felt that she got too little time in the first part of the story, but in order to keep the story line into something that made sense (at least to me...), most of the action in Volume 1 had to come from the bitchy girl, which is why Casey was the star for many chapters. This will change in this second volume.
As for Casey (we will also see quite a lot of her, of course), having been tested and then having spent 6 years n prison surrounded by scum... well, this has not done anything to make her less bitchy.
Hope you'll enjoy the rest. Cheers!