[Report This]Date: February 16 2015 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 13. Nightmare
Would not want to be in Ron's shoes on a bet.(BTW Ron Howard hahaha can't believe I just realized that) Seriously what can he say to calm Lisa? "Sorry we killed you on a hunch. Your husband and child are being detained because we need to have some leverage over you..."
Unless Ron is a fantastical liar, all his explanation will do is piss her off further. Kinda wish that one general or whatever was there so Ron could have a scapegoat and Lisa could squish him(I mere dream). Even though Ron is responsible for a lot of this, she needs to realize he has been a puppet in this whole mess. Great scene by the way, how on earth will Ron get Lisa on "their" side without giving her more fake promises?
The reveal of Casey did not disappoint. Using a greyhound bus as a dildo was great but the fact that people were inside and still alive after she finished was awesome. The descriptions were top shelf yet again bud. Only wish she'd have toyed with them a bit by turning the bus the opposite direction to force the tinies trapped inside to slide in her cum, making her even more horny. I do like the fact that since her growth at the prison her lust has been in over drive.
Now she will soon meet up with Kelly in the metropolis. Would honestly like to see them have some lesbian fun with the tinies in their area.(thats just me though)
Although I still think the train scene with Kelly was the best scene. This chapter is by far my favorite. So glad that Casey has made such an awesome entrance and that Lisa has grown. Can't wait to see what her conversation with Ron is like.
aaron
PS Kelly thinking of herself as a Greek goddess is hot.
Author's Response:
As always, thanks for the feedback :)
I don't think anyone would like to be on Ron's shoes at the moment. Lisa has all the reasons in the world to be incredibly pissed off. And when she learns more about what happened to her, her mood is not going to improve. Ron is lucky that it's Lisa and not Kelly (or, even much worse, Casey).
As for Casey, she had not had any "screen time" for some chapters, so she had to have a grand return. I'm glad that you liked the idea and how it was described. Casey is going to have much more protagonism in the story from now on, and what she just did is just a taste of what she's capable of. She's getting into the city now... And yes, her lust is unleashed.
I won't tell you too much about how she'll meet Kelly or what will happen then. Their relationship will be one of the main dynamics in the second half of this story.
Finally, Kelly just had some testimonial presence in this chapter. I wanted to have the three girls in this chapter, so I came up to the scene where she is picturing herself as a Greek goddess. I'm glad that you like the concept.
Also, I'm happy that you think this is the best chapter yet. Hopefully there will be some other chapter further on that you'll like even more. Let me tell you that there is a lot of action coming, and a few surprises too.
Thanks for taking the time to let me know what you think.
Cheers!