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Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: June 12 2015 9:09 PM Title: Date 4 - Video Dating from 200 feet

I liked the chapter! I would like to see more of these characters somewhere, I think the size discrepency and the need to use video to communicate makes their interractions interesting! Also I think it's realistic how she hurt him the first couple of times she handled him since she's never had practice on a real Liliput before!



Author's Response:

Thanks gadgetmawombo :) I've read somewhere that a sufficiently shrunken person's voice can't even be heard by regularly sized people, so I wanted to find a channel of communication between such differently sized people. Technology seemed like the most practical, it was a nice entry point for relations since you wouldn't be intimidated by their size if you were walking behind computer screens, and phones are something pretty basic that everybody would have.

Even technology has its limits as the giantess gets larger, though, so they'll have to find other ways to talk to each other when the disparity becomes too large to ignore. Or maybe the city stomping-sized ones won't care at all, and just trample over Lillians without a care. Who knows :)

I'm also of the opinion that if Pella didn't have any practice in interacting with a Lilliputian, she would have outright killed Nicky with her strength. She just knew that she couldn't apply too much force, but a practice doll won't tell you if it's in pain, so her inexperience him over the course of her play. It's tough to date a big Brob girl :p

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: June 08 2015 11:05 PM Title: Date 4 - Video Dating from 200 feet

Loved it, you showed how both Brobs and Lillis interacting as the size difference grows, soon it'll be a uphill struggle for the mountainous brob to even talk to a near microscopic Lilli. 

The permit makes sense , wonder what the half mile or mile high ones have to do just to go into the city. Which gives me an idea for finishing the story I sent, hope it can be done before school starts in august.

 

Nicky must have nearly fainted after hearing how tall her mother is but good fun, meeting a larger Brob!



Author's Response:

Thanks, Nostory! I did try to keep my story's themes to be about the difficulties of mixed size relationships, as well as trying to put my characters in some difficult situations. We'll see how they deal with them as the girls get bigger :)


Thanks for your help with the extra chapters, by the way! There's really no rush, but I'll wait for an update with bated breath! 

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