Reviews For Anniversary
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Reviewer: versusterminus7 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 01 2015 11:38 AM Title: Anniversary

Intense, but mighty quick. I'd really like to see this one shot expanded into a few other chapters- you've got the action down, but some advice- take your TIME while you do it- nothing's sexier than a well-written prose.

Well done.



Author's Response:

Yeah... I'm not a very patient person. If I do another story I'll try to overcome that, though.

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