[Report This]Date: April 17 2015 8:18 PM Title: The Bigger Sibling (Part 2)
I imagine in your universe little sisters are more terrifying than terrorists or any horror movie/game people can cook up.
I still want to see one with an sw one day but otherwise great stuff as usual.
Author's Response:
Little sisters are basically harbingers of doom in my stuff. Although occasionally just nice.
The 3rd story in this set heavily revolves around a female shrinker actually, so got you covered.
Date: April 17 2015 10:25 AM Title: ShrinkSmart (Part 1)
Super interesting chapter. I really like how Massie's viewpoint on her brother is so distorted that treating him like a human being isn't even conceivable, she's just considering what kind of possession she'll treat him as. And fortunately it's as a treasured and cared for possession, but even within that sisterly love he's still 100% a thing that she owns.
Author's Response:
Thanks! That's pretty much the vibe I'm going for with this world. Even the shrinkers who are looked on favorably are incredibly low on the food chain.
Date: April 17 2015 10:09 AM Title: ShrinkSmart (Part 1)
It appears in every single story you write. It's not an insult, as your writing is amazing, but you really need to find some synonyms as your descriptions are starting to sound similar. Also, the word 'pillowy' is being used a lot, and 'appendages' (which sounds gross ._.) Just look at your past stories and Ctrl-F "clammy," "pillowy," and "appendages."
Author's Response:
Don't know what to tell ya. When you write a lot about the same fantasy, some of those words are going to get reused a couple times between stories. I think it's safe to say I use more of a range than most here.
Date: April 17 2015 7:53 AM Title: ShrinkSmart (Part 1)
You need to find synonyms for the word "clammy"
Author's Response:
I'm curious as to why, since it only appears twice in these chapters.
Date: April 17 2015 7:32 AM Title: ShrinkSmart (Part 1)
Good ending Massie is like the girl (forgot her name) in 'like daughter like mother' somehow
Author's Response:
That's a good comparison. Though obviously Massie sees herself as much less of an equal to him than Becky did.
Date: April 17 2015 6:50 AM Title: The Bigger Sibling (Part 2)
I enjoyed the ShrinkSmart story, as it explored a concept I enjoy. Bigger Sibling, while enoyable, was definitely an example of your usual stuff. I think I would enjoy exploring another concept in the "people as pets" thing: Pampered pets. There are people in the world that treat their pets better than they treat themselves, and I'd love to see that explored here in this world you've created. Some rich spoiled girl goes the extra mile to find the healthiest, strongest, best looking shrinker she can find, and carries him or her around like her most prized posession, buying them only the best (and best looking) accessories and foods. Yet still treats them as her cute little pet, never seeing them as an equal.
Author's Response:
Actually the kind of character you're talking about is an important part of the 3rd short story in this set, though still with a little bit of a difference. Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: April 13 2015 9:25 PM Title: The Bigger Sibling (Part 1)
You are a foot content icon, I know it gets covered a lot in this fetish but your one of the best at crafting both the giantess and the plight of the tiny in their care. Keep on doing what you're doing my good man.
Author's Response:
Not a bad icon to be! Thanks for reviewing man
Date: April 13 2015 7:34 PM Title: The Bigger Sibling (Part 1)
Massie seems fun. I think her interest in lotion to keep her brother comfortable is adorable, in a patronizing sort of way. At least Massie cares about him to an extent.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing. I like to think there are people in this world who do love their shrinkers, just with the "...as a pet" caveat included.
Date: April 13 2015 12:35 PM Title: The Bigger Sibling (Part 1)
@realRS & Jack I did not ask if you get turned on by your sister which is creepy n gross but it about weird thought. anyways. if i offensed someone, my apologies.
Author's Response:
No I understood what you meant.
Date: April 13 2015 10:09 AM Title: The Bigger Sibling (Part 1)
Another great job doing a zoomed in exploration on one particular aspect of a familiar scenario. The way Paul is giving in to thinking of himself as a present represents quite a journey.
And as a note for Rodan1980, I'm also a huge fan of sibling shrink dynamics. It used to make me wonder if that represented any odd issues in my head with my own sister, but the fantasy and reality really don't have much to do with each other. Just as I love power dyanamics but don't get turned on when I read reports of real world detainee abuse, my brain doesn't really respond to thoughts of my actual sibling as a giant.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading! And that's a good way of looking at the siblings thing. My view is that not every story is meant to have the reader project themselves onto the main character. It's like watching a horror movie, where you might flinch at what's happening but you still are rooting for things to get much worse for the characters who are actually forced to be involved.
Date: April 13 2015 6:50 AM Title: ShrinkSmart (Part 1)
What a surprise!! lol great chapter! u could have end it here unless there would be a twist to follow. Generaly, I wonder that writers who write gts sibling and having 1 sister/brother ever had a thought about her/his siblings in weird situations like their stories.
Author's Response:
I can understand why you'd wonder that. For me, though, my interest isn't in the sibling relationship itself, but in seeing characters try to work through the mentality of something so taboo in addition to the emotional duress of being shrunken. It makes it more interesting for me and I think adds tension.
[Report This]Date: April 10 2015 10:03 AM Title: ShrinkSmart (Part 2)
Great chapter! I hope her huge pets are a snake, a frog, a venusfly trap, a pitcher plant, spiders web, big fish, bird of prey, etc. Things that can swallow two nude tinys whole, as they make love. Vore and the threat of vore is cool. You could also ether have her buy some of the much younger, cheaper couples, and/or a tiny hot mom and her 12 year old son, or find some wild tinys, or she could just steal sum. Try to keep the male to female ratio even if posible. The reason for the other tinys would be to scare the hell out of the two stars. Imagine their reaction when they see her feeding a young tween or teen couple to a snake, or forcing a mom and son to do it. These are just suggestions, nothing more.
Author's Response:
Quite the elaborate hellscape you're imagining. This is just a 2-parter, so we won't actually be seeing what Sherry does with the pair, but I suppose you're perfectly free to picture all of this to be the outcome.
Date: April 10 2015 6:23 AM Title: ShrinkSmart (Part 1)
The idea of a baby will definitely not fly with the mom.
Author's Response:
Then again, probably very little of anything will fly with the mom.
[Report This]Date: April 09 2015 5:16 PM Title: ShrinkSmart (Part 2)
The last bit seemed like a black cloud over the day but thus is the life of a tiny it seems.
Author's Response:
As some of the later stories will show, by comparison, this is more like a rainbow over the day.
Date: April 09 2015 2:49 PM Title: ShrinkSmart (Part 2)
Just got home. What a nice treat with chapter 2.i am sure that we have not heard of felt the last of Mom. The baby idea is a great one and a scary thought. Looking forward to more. Great writing.
Author's Response:
The mom will probably become a source of some ire for the pair, even with Sherry loving them. Thanks for reading!
Date: April 09 2015 9:48 AM Title: ShrinkSmart (Part 1)
Great chapter 2, especially the bomb dropped at the end. I've often considered shrinkers having a child, but in a circumstance like this it should weigh particualrly heavily.
Author's Response:
Thanks! It seemed like the thing to do with this first story to establish that even if things seem potentially pleasant, there's always some darker implication involved too.
Date: April 09 2015 6:36 AM Title: ShrinkSmart (Part 1)
yeah they are lucky to have Sherry. they just watch our for the mom. Still shocked to know families sell its shrunken members! Love to know their reasons in future.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing. In this world, for many it's a source of shame to have a shrinker as a family member since they are seen as less than human, so they are resented for that. There are other reasons depending on the family, too.
[Report This]Date: April 06 2015 9:31 PM Title: ShrinkSmart (Part 1)
At least Sherry seems nice, though the couple might need to worry about her mother.
Author's Response:
Probably an understatement there.
[Report This]Date: April 06 2015 6:57 PM Title: ShrinkSmart (Part 1)
Fantastic story! I bet the tiny couple and any future pets will teach her about the birds and the bees, or at the very least become a live action tiny porno for her and her friends. Maybe she can introduce them to her other pets, like a snake or horny rat? Maybe she can make them do it in a dollhouse, or a cage with a pacman frog? Maybe she can take them to show and tell, or sell them as they do it? Can you please discribe if they are naked or dressed in a chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading. Most shrinkers wear something similar to a swimsuit, so they are partially exposed, though not naked (this can change though if their owner decides otherwise). And you may be on to something with Sherry's possible intentions.
Date: April 06 2015 3:25 PM Title: ShrinkSmart (Part 1)
Loved the chapter. You did a great job of selecting details to share to make a familiar scene fresh and exciting.
I know that the shrink virus is a heavily used scenario around here, but I find it's a great way to get to the meat of the story rather than wallow in set and exposition. I'm very excited to see an anthology series from you set in such a world.
Author's Response:
Thanks very much! My thought is that a world scenario most people are already familiar with would free up space for fun character interactions. I hope the forthcoming posts leave similar impressions.