[Report This]Date: May 08 2015 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 2
Enjoying the story so far, you did a very good job with you editing.
Can't wait to see what happens to him in the next chapter; Will our tiny hero be found as his struggles do nothing but stimulate our unaware heroine? Will he even make it out of his current predicament? Or will he be stuck on the dark side of her backdoor until after she gets up from her nap? Find out in the next exciting chapter! :P
Author's Response:
Haha well just wait for the next chapter and find out!:p
[Report This]Date: May 08 2015 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 2
Love the story so far. This type of story is my favorite. Your writing is very detailed and the sentences have a good flow to them. I didn't notice and grammatical or spelling mistakes. If there was one complaint it would be that the chapters ar a little small but its a great story overall. I cannot wait for the rest of the story to unfold.
Author's Response:
Thank you. I try to write longer chapters but I'm getting better at them. I'm really hoping to fill each chapter with something for everyone so keep on the lookout!