Reviewer: Jacksmith Signed [Report This]
Date: June 25 2015 2:39 PM Title: Slightly Hungry

Not bad! Some of the tags aren't really my thing, so I'll probably bow out before he's digested, but overall it's a fun and straightforward little action tale. You could probably bulk up some of the descriptions a bit since the chapters are so short, but that's just a stylistic preference.

Author's Response:

I'm considering adding more descriptions in the upcoming chapters. It all depends on the day honestly. Sorry to hear youre not a vore fan. I like it well enough, but feet are my favorite. Thanks for the review though!

Author's Response:

I'm considering adding more descriptions in the upcoming chapters. It all depends on the day honestly. Sorry to hear youre not a vore fan. I like it well enough, but feet are my favorite. Thanks for the review though!