Date: August 13 2016 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 1
I can definitely see the influence of the source material. Yours is more violent though. I enjoy disparity. The happy family contrasted with the cruelty towards the prisoners.
I wouldn't worry about your English. It was better than many native speakers.
I hope you continue to write.
Date: June 27 2015 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 1
I really enjoy this story so far. There is something sexy about her clandestine means of obtaining pleasure from her tinies.
There is a subgenre of violent giantess stories dubbed "unaware." These stories are never bad, but I would prefer an "aware" category. In your case, the giantess is acutely aware of everything she is doing and strives to make their lives miserable while making hers just the opposite. Your story epidomizes what I love, I thank you for writing, and hope to read much more in the future.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading. I am glad you enjoyed my story. Yeah, it's appealing when the giantess is showing her sadistic side in using her play toys in an "aware" vore story as you put it. I like both "aware" and "unaware" vore stories, but the "aware" type are more dynamic and exciting for me.
My next story will certainly have "aware" vore in it, too.
[Report This]Date: June 25 2015 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 1
Nice story man! :D
I especially liked the callousness of the giantess and the way she toyed with what are basically her toys anyway. I'd love to see this continued, definitely.
(To be honest though, I had a little bit of a hard time beliving our giant not being able to feel the unfortunate dude in her snatch :p)
Author's Response:
Thanks for the nice words. Yeah, I like those type of stories where the female protagonist is in control and doesn't show any remorse towards her captives but is just using them for her own pleasure.
I was thinking of continuing the story actually. Currnetly, I am working on a different story. Still in the vore genre.
As for her husband not feeling the dude inside, well, I wanted to keep her secret safe for now (maybe in future chapters he'll find out). Tbh, I kinda rushed some scenes that could've been done better.
Anyways, I am glad you liked it :)