[Report This]Date: April 06 2016 4:48 PM Title: Merriwinter
Gonna keep it simple as I usually do: this is REALLY good.
Author's Response:
Thank you :)
Date: October 24 2015 6:09 AM Title: Merriwinter
dear god this is horrifying
i guess you can take that as a compliment...
Date: August 25 2015 11:22 AM Title: Hotel Kira
Ooh. So Miranda doesn't know about Kira's secret yet. It seems to me that Kira actually likes Miranda, but there could be a plot twist coming up.
Author's Response:
There could be indeed. Or, there could not be. Plot twist?
[Report This]Date: August 19 2015 10:18 PM Title: Merriwinter
I must compliment you on an excellent story so far! I really like the premise, the characters you have created, and the future world in which these neos live. It reminds me a bit of X-men, needless to say, but with more size changing!
I am very curious to see where this story will go, and I'm also curious to see if and when Miranda will know Kira's true nature and how she'll react then!
Author's Response:
X-Men was indeed an inspiration, yeah. Hopefully I can carve out a distinction...
Thank you for reviewing ^-^
[Report This]Date: August 17 2015 9:16 PM Title: Revelations
Oooh!
Seems so dark and cruel at the end!
Is Kira really the girl that Miranda thinks she is?
Author's Response:
Short Answer: No.
Date: August 17 2015 12:05 PM Title: Hospitalized
I can't believe you left me in suspense :(
But I loved the update, and I can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
So sorry.
More to come in a couple hours!
Date: August 12 2015 8:57 AM Title: Diner Date
Huh. So there are still people that can't stand neos.
I'm liking the way this is playing out, even without the giantess content yet.
Author's Response:
Yep. World's a dark place, even for people with crazy-ass superpowers. There will always be assholes to ruin someone's day.
Thanks. It's getting to that sort of thing...slowly. -.-;
Date: August 06 2015 7:26 PM Title: Merriwinter
Loving your references. What's that translation? Is it Italian? The flavor of the names lines up . . .
As it is, I'm regretting not taking you up on your offer now, but I'm sure we could accomplish something grand.
In fact, once our respective goddess tales have finished, how do you feel about a collab?
Oh, and the chapter this time around was absolutely fantastic. You have me itching for more.
Author's Response:
It's Latin. Italian's relatively similar, though.
The offer still stands...but that can be discussed via email.
I would love to do a collab ^-^
I'm glad you liked it. Was it to your predictions or no?
[Report This]Date: August 06 2015 11:26 AM Title: Crimson Romance
Hmmm...
Personally I prefer longer chapters over shorter ones, so there's a plus side. I love the way your characters are developing, and loved the end of this chapter with Kira! Loving this!
Author's Response:
Thanks :) Character development is good to achieve, even in stories like this.
[Report This]Date: August 05 2015 11:06 AM Title: To Woo a Goddess
One heck of a story I'm reading! love the long chapters and keep updating!
Author's Response:
Thanks. It's a relatively long story, and I wasn't sure if it was better to have long chapters or fifty chapters. I decided on long chapters.
Another one will be posted tonight or tomorrow morning.
Date: August 05 2015 12:33 AM Title: To Woo a Goddess
I knew it!
Can I call them or what?
If you don't understand what I mean, other reviewers . . . I like puzzles, and I suppose you don't. That's as much as I'm willing to say.
I'm hooked! Feed the craving for more!
Author's Response:
I could have just dove straight into the S&M violence and sex, but puzzles are better. I basically said "Nah, I'm actually going to write this one"
I am curious as to your predictions. E-mail me/message me if you want *shrug*
Date: August 04 2015 10:11 AM Title: Merriwinter
Horrific? Boo. I rather liked it.
As for the story itself, I can taste that setup. I get the feeling that Kira isn't exactly telling the complete truth. It might just be lingering sentiment from the previous story where she was . . . well, I'm just going to drop her as a solid 6 on the ORS and leave it at that . . . but there's something about a radiant being that scales relatively lowly that seems fishy to me.
I can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Some people did enjoy it, yes, but we're all our own worst critics.
Hahaha that's one way to put her XD Well, time will tell. Or rather, more writing will tell. *write write write* Glad you're enjoying it.
[Report This]Date: August 03 2015 8:28 AM Title: Merriwinter
I really like what you have written so far. Can't wait to see what happens next between Miranda and Kira(I too love a sexy London accent).
aaron
PS I wasn't clear if Miranda's "power" is that she can shrink inanimate objects or that she just invented a device to do so.
Author's Response:
Thanks. They'll be getting up to some hijinks.
Yes, as a beta neo, Miranda can shrink inanimate objects as naturally as anyone else flexes their fingers.