[Report This]Date: April 06 2016 4:48 PM Title: Merriwinter
Gonna keep it simple as I usually do: this is REALLY good.
Author's Response:
Thank you :)
Date: October 24 2015 6:09 AM Title: Merriwinter
dear god this is horrifying
i guess you can take that as a compliment...
[Report This]Date: August 19 2015 10:18 PM Title: Merriwinter
I must compliment you on an excellent story so far! I really like the premise, the characters you have created, and the future world in which these neos live. It reminds me a bit of X-men, needless to say, but with more size changing!
I am very curious to see where this story will go, and I'm also curious to see if and when Miranda will know Kira's true nature and how she'll react then!
Author's Response:
X-Men was indeed an inspiration, yeah. Hopefully I can carve out a distinction...
Thank you for reviewing ^-^
Date: August 06 2015 7:26 PM Title: Merriwinter
Loving your references. What's that translation? Is it Italian? The flavor of the names lines up . . .
As it is, I'm regretting not taking you up on your offer now, but I'm sure we could accomplish something grand.
In fact, once our respective goddess tales have finished, how do you feel about a collab?
Oh, and the chapter this time around was absolutely fantastic. You have me itching for more.
Author's Response:
It's Latin. Italian's relatively similar, though.
The offer still stands...but that can be discussed via email.
I would love to do a collab ^-^
I'm glad you liked it. Was it to your predictions or no?
Date: August 04 2015 10:11 AM Title: Merriwinter
Horrific? Boo. I rather liked it.
As for the story itself, I can taste that setup. I get the feeling that Kira isn't exactly telling the complete truth. It might just be lingering sentiment from the previous story where she was . . . well, I'm just going to drop her as a solid 6 on the ORS and leave it at that . . . but there's something about a radiant being that scales relatively lowly that seems fishy to me.
I can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Some people did enjoy it, yes, but we're all our own worst critics.
Hahaha that's one way to put her XD Well, time will tell. Or rather, more writing will tell. *write write write* Glad you're enjoying it.
[Report This]Date: August 03 2015 8:28 AM Title: Merriwinter
I really like what you have written so far. Can't wait to see what happens next between Miranda and Kira(I too love a sexy London accent).
aaron
PS I wasn't clear if Miranda's "power" is that she can shrink inanimate objects or that she just invented a device to do so.
Author's Response:
Thanks. They'll be getting up to some hijinks.
Yes, as a beta neo, Miranda can shrink inanimate objects as naturally as anyone else flexes their fingers.