Date: September 24 2015 10:10 AM Title: Truce? Part 1
I have to say, you're not very good at this.
The girls are the arrogant ones, not the men, and more importantly, this truce shows their sheer stupidity. They attack them without remorse, then expect them to just come over and have no fear of being attacked.
And why is Todd such a bitch? He seems all right with all this mindless violence.
Please tell me you haven't made these women invincible. The fact is, the men must have some form of protection, otherwise the women would have walked in years ago. And don't say 'The Wall' because THAT IS NOT A SIGN OF AN ADVANCED CIVILIZATION. Give them some kind of counter-measure so they can show these over-confident feminine creeps that they don't need women!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and giving back feedback on plot holes, I hope you read on to see if sense can be made.
Date: September 23 2015 9:21 PM Title: Truce? Part 1
So far, despite what Amy might think in her arrogance, it does seem like the men can function, provide and defend themselves just fine without women. Ironic since she seems to think that the men are the arrogant ones! If anything, women appear to be only danger that they can't defend themselves against. Men of this world so far have only shown that they want to be left alone, we haven't had any indication of men attacking women or anything of the sort.
Also, I guess I should ask but don't men have like bombs, nukes or even laser beams or something? For a civilization that is supposed to be so advanced they certainly haven't shown it in the weapons department! Unless these women are invincible, I doubt they could survive a nuke or laser beam as hot as the sun. They are 200 ft tall not 2000ft tall, after all.
Author's Response:
As is in most cases not all is as it seems right now.