Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: July 15 2016 10:51 AM Title: Chapter 11 ... 7-15-16

Wow, this is a great story! I can't believe that I have never read it before.

The step sister seems way too good to be true. She has perfect everything and double D boobs? And she's only 17? Do these girls even exist in real life? Haha!

Speaking of the step sister, I love her attitude and control over the situation behind her mother's back. She keeps reminding him of her presence and never lets him forget it.

I love the dialogue in the story. Lots of talking, teasing, but I think you need to support that with a bit more action. But, please continue the awesome teasing, it's great. I would just love to have some action with that teasing.

The stepmother seems like a glimmer of hope to Mike, but we don't even know what she is like. It's been all stepsister so far, hence the title, but you would think that after all this time, that Mike would have figured out how to get to his stepmom.

I think he should've used some reverse psychology on Olivia and say "No, please don't take me to mom, please Olivia, don't let her see me like this!" Then Olivia who delights in Mike's suffering, may actually just take him to mom so she can see him suffer. But then her plan backfires as mom takes Mike from her. Mike would then be happy that she fooled Olivia. (I'm sure Olivia is too smart for this, but it's worth a shot.)

If I was Mike, I would just go to his stepmom's room, climb on the sink or something, and then arouse himself on it, so he shrinks on the sink counter and he can hide there until, let's say his step mom brushes her teeth and then he pops out.

Or...when is a giant, just call his step mom, tell her to make sure she is alone, and then tell her all the details.

Maybe, Mike just wants to be with Olivia, becuase he has so many opportunities to go to mom, but he just doesn't want to do it.

I'm also, kinda rooting for his stepmom to find him. I can't wait to see her reaction and I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Wow.   Thanks for the long review.  I appreciate it.

I'm glad you like the stepsister's attitude and the teasing.  Thanks for your ideas.  I liked your hypothetical scenario where Mike would have used reverse psychology... and shrinking in the sink is interesting as well.  Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: July 15 2016 9:05 AM Title: Chapter 11 ... 7-15-16

WOW! You consolidated all the other chapters you couldn't find space for in the other compilation reprint? Innovative! As for Mike? Either he slept right through Monday, or his stepmom and Olivia are back early.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  It was a lot of consolidation, with all the chapters in a single post.

Mike went to sleep Sunday morning, waking Sunday evening.  He really hadn't much time for sleep with the stress of being shrunk.  Anyway, I wanted the reader to get back to the interesting stuff.  Thanks again.