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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 22 2016 12:14 PM Title: Chapter 12 ... 7-22-16

Am I the only one who thought this was the start of a porno where the stepmom joins the step daughter and her friend to play with the guy?

Well, instead the opposite happens and Colleen breaks down the party. But that last sequence gave me a hint, that perhaps Colleen wants all the fun to herself.

Relationship viewed from a different perspective....hmm. Step mom-step mom, to stepmom, step toy?

I agree with some other comments. Colleen seems like she has something special for Mike and I'm excited to see what is it.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Thanks for your comments.  I appreciate your thoughtful insights.  I want the story to develop so that it has nuance and depth, whatever is enjoyable to read.

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 22 2016 9:56 AM Title: Chapter 12 ... 7-22-16

Thanks for updating. I this story a great deal. Always hoped that Colleen would get in on this shrinking fun. Can't wait to see what happens next.

aaron

Author's Response:

Thanks for your comments.  I've always enjoyed your thoughts on this story, which have influenced the direction of it.

Reviewer: deathshinigami Signed [Report This]
Date: July 22 2016 9:15 AM Title: Chapter 12 ... 7-22-16

I really like where this seems to be going



Author's Response:

Thanks for commenting.  It could get interesting.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 22 2016 9:08 AM Title: Chapter 12 ... 7-22-16

Mike really should've LOCKED his bedroom door. The fact that he didn't means there just might be something to Olivia's Freudian analysis of her stepbrother.

Author's Response:

Thanks for your comments.  Yes, he really should have locked his door.  I imagined that he didn't have a lock at all, unlike the rest of his family.  Though Mike never requested his stepmom install a lock for his bedroom -- despite the many and often intrusions from his stepsister.  So Olivia's Freudian analysis could be true on some level.

Reviewer: Afroking Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 22 2016 9:02 AM Title: Chapter 12 ... 7-22-16

super glad your back. I love the direction your going with the story. How does Colleen handle this situation?



Author's Response:

Thanks for your nice comments.  You'll see how Colleen handles the situation soon.  Thanks for reading.

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