[Report This]Date: April 06 2017 8:42 PM Title: Jo's Breath
have just started this story and enjoying it a lot so far
Author's Response: Glad to hear it! I hope you'll keep enjoying it!
[Report This]Date: February 06 2017 1:49 PM Title: Jo's Breath
Absolutely incredible, loved it :) I hope you continue. I adored the belch, very descriptive! Perhaps it's asking a lot given the overall theme of the story, but would you ever consider doing a fart chapter? I feel your style would lend itself very well to that kind of chapter. At any rate, I look forward to whatever you come up with next!
Author's Response: Glad you're liking it! I'll be honest with you, I honestly doubt our protagonist will be spending any time with Jo's rear this story, but I'll certainly keep your recommendation in mind for any future stories I may write. Apologies for that, but I appreciate the continued support regardless. :)
[Report This]Date: February 02 2017 6:18 PM Title: Jo's Breath
10 and a cum from me. Love the detail and pacing. I'm guessing this is not going to be a short story?
Author's Response: Excellent to hear you're so invested! As to your question, no, this is gonna be a long one- not sure exactly how long, but easily above ten chapters, maybe even breaking twenty, depending. I can imagine that a whole long story solely focusing on mouth play may drive off some people, but hey, for people like us in the mouthplay-odour niche it's a fun ride, right?