Date: February 13 2017 12:54 AM Title: Jo's Lips
I hope is September already! :D
Great chapter!! I love how meticolous you are with details in all leves: explaining the scenario, the feelings, the enviroment...It's like being really there. Definitely as a vore lover this story is gonna be printed and well saved with me once you are done with it.
WE VORE LOVERS NEEDED YOU!!! :D :D :D
P.S: Not really a fan of gingivitis or any other mouth diseases but I'm sure that whatever you have in mind I'm gonna like it anyways :)
Oh, and if you need any ideas to encourage your cretivity skills, here are my two cents:
- Maybe she goes for a run with him try to survive the continuous movement and the breath-in-out of her mouth? She would also salivate a lot and would make her wet cavern even more slippery. She can also drink some water after the run to put a final big challenge to our tiny guy ^^
- Maybe she goes on a date or just call home her significant other and well...you know ;) (Though even as exciting as it could be there's too much of this kind of scenario around, which would make it a little bit repetitive)
- How about playing Guitar Hero or sth like that? We have again the cardio as the first option but also a nice loudly survival with the titanic Jo's voice singing. Maybe Our tiny guest has to deal with some deafness after that lol
- Maybe she can test his tiny guest willing to be there by offering him a few chances of escaping. For example, she my goes to buy whatever at any store and leave her mouth open while talking to the clerk, so the tiny guy considers asking for help. This idea would work better if our little man has struggled so much inside Jo's mouth that he is exhausted and scared that he may can't make it and end up swallowed alive.
- Typical one (vol. II): Chewing gum. Making bubbles with him inside.
- Typical one (vol. III): Talking with someone at the phone while eating/going through her day routine, etc
As said, just my two cents!
I'm more hyped than myself next June waiting for the next Game Of Thrones season. Well, actually maybe not, but still. I'm hyped as fuck.
Can't wait to next chapter!!! ^^
Author's Response: Thanks again for all the continued support; I'm humbled by your kind words. More importantly, thank you for the suggestions! While I already had a few ideas of yours in mind (chewing gum, her voice,etc) I'm really liking the idea of her going on a run; never considered how that would affect our little hero in her mouth. I'm also thinking I could get a chapter out of your test idea, as well as incorporating talking when eating into a chapter I already have planned. Considering the slobbish way I've portrayed Jo so far, it'd.certainly fit the bill! Either way, keep an eye out for those chapters, I'll be sure to give you a shout out for them. :) As for Game of Thrones Season 7....I really can't blame you, my dude. It's gonna be legen...wait for it until June....dary, I'm so hyped about it I could cry, no joke. :')
Date: February 12 2017 7:14 PM Title: Jo's Lips
Oh man it is ON! If his eyes were watering with her jaws still open... man I can't wait ^_^ To say I'm looking forward to a micro's detailed description of an unhygenic mouth is an understatement to be sure. Gingivitis here we come!
Author's Response: Oh, it is on like Donkey Kong. I'll give you fair warning, there is a toothbrush in both Jo's and thus our tiny protagonist's future... but not before he gets to experience the true inner stench and experience of her filthy mouth, so get hyped for that. Oh, and don't worry about her mouth getting clean; even if she does brush her teeth, her mouth certainly isn't immediately going to be utopia; that's just no fun. What I have planned will make her mouth even worse than before by the end of this... so stay tuned. ;)