Reviewer: TinyLeo Signed [Report This]
Date: February 18 2017 2:25 AM Title: Jo's Dental Hygiene

So far so freaking great Lord!! What a journey went our friend through, I wish I could do the same. The way you immerse yourself in the story and try to imagine all the details vividly makes me wonder if you've been really inside a girl mouth before lol 

Spectacular the moment when she drinks the mouthwasher and starts to gargle: So close and yet so safe from the gates of death...Great idea there!!

Just to give some snag, I wish there were some dialogue in it, but I know that even though it's more realistic not to as in her routine Jo wouldn't talk. I hope to see more of your talented work sooner than later!! I'm totally hyped for this story. 

 

Oh, by the way, I started my own campaign on twitter to get you an artist to draw this story and to let your name be heard by other important size writers. That being said, I'd recommend you to visit some DeviantArt profiles: Aborigen, Goddess Tina, James Mason, Spawn GTS, Safkteur, Dofus59, Flagg3D and many more I'm sure you'll come across as you lurk around them ;)

Here I give you some links to their work I think you'd love (some of them seem to be done directly for this story lol):

http://flagg3d.deviantart.com/art/Prelude-to-Vore-III-654921061

http://spawngts.deviantart.com/art/Nightmare-2-643201051

http://saftkeur.deviantart.com/art/Mimi-goodbye-gulp-435341456

http://spawngts.deviantart.com/art/Brushing-Foam-Version-651754320

Can't wait to see the following chapters!! :D :D :D

Author's Response: Well I'll be darned! Thank you as always, my friend; especially for trying to get my humble works heard AND made into pictures! That's something I could only dream of, and someone helping me to make said dreams a reality is just the most awesome thing ever. From the bottom of my heart, I thank you. :,) I'll definitely check out those links, too; always looking for new art to behold. The thing is, a lot of the big quality vore artists ask for a financial contribution for their services; money that, sadly, I don't have. But who knows? Maybe someone will see it and love it so much that they just HAVE to look at it. Hope springs eternal! Oh, if only I could experience what I write; that'd be a utopia. I suppose that's the worst thing about macrophilia in general, that with current technology where it stands, we can never experience what we fantasise. In a way, though, this is our silver lining; that we have people like the myriad of wonderful authors on this site that can create and describe such vivid stories for the reading benefit of our community. It really is great. As for dialogue, I get your gripe; having Jo talk to her little prisoner really helped build up the action. There is a reason, though, that I've cut it out for now;'in that I wanted to reveal its effects on our protagonist in its own chapter. Which may or may not be coming up next,.. stay tuned. ;)