Reviewer: ilikepie Signed [Report This]
Date: February 27 2017 7:26 PM Title: Jo's Cruelty

Another great set!  Good to get some introspection on how he is dealing with the situation.  Got that uvula touched already :3  Lunch is going to be the biggest challenge imo, wonder what is on the menu...  Hope we can get some exploration/observation during the slow times, maybe discover the crud that sticks between her teeth from lunch (or even missed from brushing XP) 

Author's Response: Thanks! I feel like the introspection really helps to understand how our little protagonist is feeling about the trials he goes through, and by extension how awful said trials are, painting a better picture overall. Little things like that go a long way, I find. As for what's on the menu, that'd be telling... but I will confirm that it's something more solid than soggy cereal. I feel,like you're gonna like what I have planned; it may already include your suggestion. After all, Jo's not the only one getting hungry... ;)