Date: March 03 2017 12:07 PM Title: Jo's Teeth
Wonderful chapters again, as always! Glad to see that you liked the idea of Jo cruel behaviour with her tiny speck-hopefully-future-snack! :)
Pretty interesting this last chapter, not only for the obvious reason you already commented on your end notes regarding odor and stink inside mouths, but also for another irregular situation you created here. As it also happens with the other body parts a giantess usually uses as weapon in other naughty stories/vids/artwork there's a preliminary humilliation based on "pain and no gain". Like digging your own grave, when a tiny person succumbs under a feet he may previously has worshipped it. The same goes for any other parts (butt, hands, breasts, vagina....you name it), and for the first time (or at least that I recall), the same goes with a titanic mouth. Working on polishing the weapon that might kill you before it does. Fantastic.
Can't wait, as always. Hyped is my usual mode with you, man.
Oh, btw, do you recommend any other authors with a writing style like you to make the wait esier? :)
Author's Response: Thanks as always, Mr. Leo! You bring up an interesting point, I must say. Foot worship is almost a given thing when it comes to feet-related chapters on this website, and willingness to interact with certain body parts is certainly common; but it's not something you usually see when it comes to the mouth, especially in this sense. While our little protagonist clearly experiences a lot of discomfort in Jo's mouth, I try to make it clear that he's enjoying it as well, in subtle ways. Oh well; much as I'd love to see more odour/mouth play/entrapment combo stories on here, the rarity of them means I can carve out the niche for myself, and fill it with content that I hope can please both myself and you guys. :) As for authors... like I say, I feel like my style and premise are a bit of a niche, so I personally haven't found anything quite like it. The story I feel comes closest to it is, as I mentioned in another review, is JDO's Tongue Ring; sadly, it never made it past the first chapter, but still definitely worth a read while I find time to get the next chapter out. :D
[Report This]Date: March 02 2017 7:03 PM Title: Jo's Teeth
Agreed on those end notes. Mouths are rarely clean, occationally white/straight, and often smelly in the real world yet few stories touch on that. Feet, butts, and more get smell descriptions but mouths often go ignored. All the more reason to cherish this story :)
Blah blah excellent blah blah great detail I've said it before. Looking forward to when her natural halitosis begins to take charge again. Really looking forward to some kind of debrief/ honest review by our hero if he gets the chance. With the way he is getting used to the digusting parts, I love the idea of him wanting to come back again if the risk of death was no longer a factor ;)
Author's Response: Right? I seriously don't get why the ideas of odour and feet/butt going together are so commonplace, and yet the mouth never gets the same treatment. Us odour/mouth play fetishists seem to be in a bit of a niche minority; it's part of the reason I wrote this story in the first place, because I'd never quite seen something like it on here before. JDO came close with Tongue Ring, but alas, it never was continued. So I figured, what the heck? Let's put my own story out there- and thus far I'm really happy with the results and feedback. As for a debrief or review, I'm not entirely sure how I'd do that- perhaps give his opinions to Jo herself? I do really like the idea, so feel free to elsborate on it; I'd certainly consider fitting it into one of the closing chapters. As for risk of death, don't put all your chips on the table just yet... in Jo's mouth, that's ALWAYS a risk. ;)