[Report This]Date: April 02 2017 7:12 PM Title: Jo's Wrath
Very good chapter! I hope that he will voluntarily end his life in the bowels of jo to his great satisfaction ;)
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! You'll have to stay tuned see what happens in the depth's of Jo's body... ;)
[Report This]Date: March 30 2017 9:46 PM Title: Jo's Wrath
Damn, now I want a paraell universe Chapter 18 where he says "Oh screw this - I'm taking her out!" and chokes her to death.
Perhaps a special edition after you wrap up?
Author's Response: How ruthless! I have actually been toying with the idea of a separate story for alternate conclusions after I wrap this son of a bitch up, but I'll see what sort of feedback for it later closer to the time. Thanks for reviewing! :)
Date: March 29 2017 6:33 PM Title: Jo's Wrath
Holy shit! I was not expecting this twist! I was personally hopping for a mutually happy ending but that is not possible now :/ Well that won't ruin my enjoyment. I hope things don't end too soon. I know our friend my disagree but I never want this to end :P
While I do want to see the stomach, I also want him to win but again, that's just my personal desires and with all this story has offered it would be selfish to demand more >_< Can't wait to see what you have planned next!!
Author's Response: Don't give up hope, my good man; I might just pull another Shyamalan on you just yet. ;P Just look forward to the night, there'll be plenty more action before we reach the end, including our foray into Jo's guts I've been teasing for so long. I'm thinking there'll be at least more than seven chapters yet, so while the end is in sight, there's still plenty more to come. Glad to hear you're still enjoying reading this as much as I am writing it. :)