Giantess World
Reviews For Jo's Mouth
Reviewer: ilikepie Signed 
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Date: May 11 2017 5:33 PM Title: Jo's Kiss
Author's Response: I'll be honest with you- neither did I! Originally Jo's Kiss was gonna be a standalone chapter, with Jo just snogging some randomer, but it didn't quite feel right. So, in trying to search for a way to make it work, I thought up Melissa. As I write the chapter, she developed a backstory to make her more credible, which overall became more plot... and thus, Jo's Friend was born out of my desire to keep my chapters at refular length. xD I'm not gonna lie, I'm exaggerating a reedy bit when it comes to the dental of most Brits.. there's certainly a few people like that, but trust me, it's a minority! Always glad to see you review, my friend. It certainly is going to be a hell of a ride these next few chapters... after twenty-one chapters, I'm finally filling my promise on one of my tags. I'll let you figure out which one. ;)
[Report This]Date: May 11 2017 5:33 PM Title: Jo's Kiss
Been a while since I put a review up on this story. Did NOT expect another girl to be brought into the mix, let alone another sadist. Love that she is able to be frank about her experiences with Jo though XD
Kiss was well writen, clear that Melissa wanted a piece of our hero. Seems the myth about British teeth is still the law of the land ;P
Looking forward to what is certain to be a gnarly few next chapters and an ending that can go in any direction!
Author's Response: I'll be honest with you- neither did I! Originally Jo's Kiss was gonna be a standalone chapter, with Jo just snogging some randomer, but it didn't quite feel right. So, in trying to search for a way to make it work, I thought up Melissa. As I write the chapter, she developed a backstory to make her more credible, which overall became more plot... and thus, Jo's Friend was born out of my desire to keep my chapters at refular length. xD I'm not gonna lie, I'm exaggerating a reedy bit when it comes to the dental of most Brits.. there's certainly a few people like that, but trust me, it's a minority! Always glad to see you review, my friend. It certainly is going to be a hell of a ride these next few chapters... after twenty-one chapters, I'm finally filling my promise on one of my tags. I'll let you figure out which one. ;)