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Reviews For Jo's Mouth
Reviewer: Shaman Signed 
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Date: May 17 2017 1:35 AM Title: Jo's Gullet
Author's Response: Thank you! I couldn't possibly say; surely, that'd spoil what his fate was. ;) But I will tell you at least that the end is in sight. Watch this space!
[Report This]Date: May 17 2017 1:35 AM Title: Jo's Gullet
Amazing chapter, man! So is the next chapter going to be the final?
Author's Response: Thank you! I couldn't possibly say; surely, that'd spoil what his fate was. ;) But I will tell you at least that the end is in sight. Watch this space!
Reviewer: ilikepie Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16 2017 8:30 PM Title: Jo's Gullet
Author's Response: Well, like I said in response to Yiur last review, certainly not me! Trying actively to kill the little dude is evil, I suppose, but who knows what her intentions were for it? It could easily have been jealousy rather than just gleeful sadden, and I tried to keep that ambiguous for a bit of mystery. Thing is, 'evil' can be completely subjective, so... who knows? :P Glad you liked the use of Melissa's mouth; I'd been itching to describe something a little different after I felt like it was getting a little same-y. As for the next few chapters...the end is indeed in sight, but as I said to Shaman, how soon will it come? I couldn't possibly say, for fear of spoiling it. You'll just have to wait and see,,, and God, I can tell its gonna be a hell of a lot of fun to write, Until then, you'll just ha d to imagine.... ;P
Date: May 16 2017 8:30 PM Title: Jo's Gullet
And there it is. Our new aquentance turns out to be even more evil than Jo, who'd have guessed?! Great work on the multi-mouth perspective, during and after the kiss. Next chapter will be a doozy and I'm thinking it and the next will set the tone for the way this will end. I see 3 ways this can go. Can not wait!!!
Author's Response: Well, like I said in response to Yiur last review, certainly not me! Trying actively to kill the little dude is evil, I suppose, but who knows what her intentions were for it? It could easily have been jealousy rather than just gleeful sadden, and I tried to keep that ambiguous for a bit of mystery. Thing is, 'evil' can be completely subjective, so... who knows? :P Glad you liked the use of Melissa's mouth; I'd been itching to describe something a little different after I felt like it was getting a little same-y. As for the next few chapters...the end is indeed in sight, but as I said to Shaman, how soon will it come? I couldn't possibly say, for fear of spoiling it. You'll just have to wait and see,,, and God, I can tell its gonna be a hell of a lot of fun to write, Until then, you'll just ha d to imagine.... ;P
Reviewer: adamnight Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16 2017 7:26 PM Title: Jo's Gullet
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Stay tuned for more soon! :D
[Report This]Date: May 16 2017 7:26 PM Title: Jo's Gullet
I just love this story <3
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Stay tuned for more soon! :D