[Report This]Date: May 26 2017 2:16 AM Title: Jo's Inebriation
First of all, this was one of the few real good stomach in-depth chapters I've read from any story. It's so good that it inspires me to add that type of scenery to my next stories (you may have kick-started a whole new subgenre / subtag for this site with these chapters)
And I'm glad it didn't end here. It would be really anti-climactic to me if it ended then and there. I don't know if you've already written the other chapters, but maybe add in a little butt/VG stuff for good measure? :)
Also, I'd love to see a prequel of her doing this to someone else haha. I think you may have a series on your hand there.
Keep up the amazing work, man!
Author's Response: Wow, thank you! You're right, I never see enough in-depth stomach chapters on this site, especially not ones that cover a whole chapter. I'm honoured that I've inspired your own works in the future, though; and that you think I've started a trend here! I don't know whether it'd come under endosoma or not, but I'd certainly be somewhat interested in seeing it possibly become a vore sub genre. I do have some body exploration planned next chapter, but I can't guarantee you'll be seeing any of that... but I'll see if I can fit it in. A prequel's also been on the cards for a good while, as I have some good ideas for Jo doing other things to other people in her past; including some I've teased in the story itself. We'll see... ;)
[Report This]Date: May 25 2017 9:13 PM Title: Jo's Inebriation
Knew it and personally happy c: Amazing details as always. Somehow this stomach chapter is evenn better than the one dedicated to it?! Really love the portrayal of food rafts, churning, and a moving host. Here's hoping he doesn't stay knocked out for long, ever minute unconcious in a minute less experiencing that maw. The question is, will she brush her teeth before bed or go to sleep with sick in her mouth XP
Still a number of ways this could go but I'll save my predictions unless you want feedback for things yet to be written :x
Prequel, sequel, alternate chapters, I need more Jo's Mouth! <3
Author's Response: Glad you liked it as always, my good man! Yeah, I sorta split the chapters into stomach-description (because there was just so much of it) and stomach-action, and as a result I think the latter turned out better, or at least more exciting, than the former. Trust me, he'll wake up soon... and no, do you really think someone as drunk as Jo is gonna remember dental hygiene? ;) There will most likely be a prequel, but it won't be mouth-centred; though don't fret, it'll still appear as much as possible. Until then, though, there's still three chapters to go.... so stay tuned!